ZIM Forum - Diễn đàn hỏi đáp Tiếng Anh

Hi Minh,

2 cách hiểu em cung cấp đều đúng nhé. 

Cách một là dùng 'as' adj 'as' để so sánh bằng. 

Cách thứ 2 là idiom với tính từ good; as good as = very nearly. 

chào Mẫn,

em có thể dùng từ điển Longman https://www.ldoceonline.com em nhé

Chào Thư, mình gửi phiên bản đã sửa:

Undoubtedly, fishing is one of the most dangerous occupations in the world. 

According to statistics, it has consistently been ranked as the deadliest occupation since 1992. In 2009, it was estimated that at least 24,000 fishermen died every year and more than 200 were seriously injured, though the actual number is likely higher. Workers in this industry face unique and life-threatening hazards, such as vessel casualties, falls overboard due to slippery surfaces, and diving incidents. Additionally, they are exposed to unpreventable natural disasters and harsh weather conditions, including tsunamis, storms, and dangerous marine life. Despite having access to machines and technology that assist them, it is still incredibly difficult to save the crew's life if they experience any accidents during their journey. What's more, technological advances have made the work more frantic and increased the workload. Crews are required to work tirelessly for endless hours, which leads to bone diseases, sunburn, and esophageal problems. 

In conclusion, this occupation is incredibly perilous, and I deeply appreciate the sacrifices that these workers make. It is important to address the issues related to decent work on fishing vessels in order to ensure their safety and well-being."

Bài viết của Thư đã rất tốt rồi, nhưng còn một số chỗ mình đã thay đổi để đoạn văn flow tự nhiên hơn. Thư so sánh với bài của mình và so sánh nhé, nếu có thắc mắc nào đừng ngại comment vào bài viết.