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Em đặt aim 8.0 listening với reading ạ, mà lúc e luyện cam thì có lúc 7.0-7.5 nhưng có khi lại xuống 6.5. Em có chuyển qua luyện road to ielts với cả test plus nhưng mà điểm thì cứ ở 6.5-7.0 là thường xuyên. Thầy/cô có thể giúp e tìm ra cách nâng band được không ạ ?

ĐỀ BÀI: Traffic accidents: Causes and solutions

Bài làm

The development of society comes with a lot of challenges that we have to deal with. Traffic accidents have been a pressing issue in our country as well as worldwide. This composition will put an answer to the question of why road traffic accidents occur along with some potential solutions. 

To begin with, it can be denied that traffic accidents are awful issues caused entirely by humans. Traffic collations happen due to a variety of factors such as dangerous roadways, but primarily by our lack of knowledge. One serious violation that people often make is using alcohol drinking before driving. Not only does this infringement cause danger for ourselves but also for the people around us. Besides, driving distraction will also be mentioned as a common cause of traffic accidents and driving over the speed limit and breaking traffic rules are not exceptions. Thus, it may be inferred that even our seemingly minor errors might cause serious effects that could even cost us our lives. 

Prevention of traffic accidents is no longer the responsibility of only the government but all of us. It's time to take action to make driving accidents a thing of the past. Education is the most crucial factor that determines whether a reform effort is successful or not. Children who are the master of the future world have to be taught about road traffic safety at school. As for the grown-ups, there should be a heavy fine for those who break the traffic laws intentionally. There is only one way to change the current situation which is to improve awareness. As a result, we must make every effort to propagate traffic safety knowledge. I firmly believe that, if each of us joins our hands to reduce traffic accidents, then soon we will have a world with zero traffic accidents. 

All in all, traffic accidents are horrible catastrophes that cost both health and wealth. We must try to raise the awareness of the people around us as well as improve ourselves. We have to completely eradicate traffic accidents in order to transform our world into heaven

Trình độ của em hiện tại ở mức 4.5 và em đang theo học khóa INTER bên ZIM.Ngoài giáo trình và bài tập của trung tâm thì em nên mua những sách nào hay luyện thêm những tài liệu ở đâu ạ ? Em cảm ơn

Thầy cô anh chị giúp em xem bài này có bị kém task achievement hay có lỗi nghiêm trọng gì ko ạ, em nộp chấm chữa 1 bài xong thấy điểm đó kém quá nên viết lại nhưng không biết đã sửa được chưa :((

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.

Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is becoming increasingly common that these days, companies often highlight that their products are novel in some aspects in their advertisements. In my opinion, there are several leading causes of this trend as well as some consequences it can result in. 

There are numerous factors leading to the tendency of enterprises to put focus on advertising the novelties of their goods. Firstly, they usually do so in order to attract customers. As people tend to pay more attention to products that are new and unique, those advertisements would provide them with the information that they may find fascinating and eventually purchase them. Secondly, businesses often want the public to recognize them as the pioneers in their field through ads, which means that they can have a considerable advantage over others. As a result, this way of marketing may help them increase their sales and gain profit more quickly.

This trend can cause many consequences. One negative impact is that some advertisers often take advantage of this method to deceive their customers by marketing about the state-of-the-art features that their commodities do not contain. As a consequence, this may put a detrimental impact on buyers’ trust and they might boycott the brands, which can lead to a significant decrease in the product sales. Another drawback is that because of the increasing number of advertisements telling that their product is the best and the most innovative, customers tend to not believe in them anymore. Therefore, companies could only waste their money on those ineffective  promotions.

In conclusion, there are several contributing factors which lead to this trend that enterprises usually put more concentration on what is novel about their products, and some negative impacts for both buyers and sellers have been outlined. Its sources and consequences should be taken into account. People should have further consideration on this tendency.