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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that dangerous sports is forbidden by governments meanwhile others think people are right to join in any different kinds of sports or activities. In this essay, i will point out both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, critics of dangerous sports give strong reasons why governments should impose an official ban on such activities. Firstly, there have been numerous incidents where members of rescue service must put their own lives in danger to save extreme sports enthusiasts who are in life-threatening situations. Secondly, it is necessary at times to infringe on personal freedoms because people who lack the essential experience or who are not in the peak of physical condition sometimes join in dangerous sports.

On the other hand, i still think that people must be allowed to participate in any sports or activities what they like. However, when joining dangerous sports, people should learn safety rules and require professtionally qualified instructor. One reason is that they can minimize the risk of accidents and injuries if they impose sensible safety. For example, all sports which carry a significant element of danger, such as scuba diving or paragliding should be supervised by an experienced and professionally qualified instructor. 

In conclusion, dangerous sports should be limited rather than ban completely. I strongly agree that people should have freedom to choose any sports or activities to play with safety rules. 

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ĐỀ BÀI: Traffic accidents: Causes and solutions

Bài làm

The development of society comes with a lot of challenges that we have to deal with. Traffic accidents have been a pressing issue in our country as well as worldwide. This composition will put an answer to the question of why road traffic accidents occur along with some potential solutions. 

To begin with, it can be denied that traffic accidents are awful issues caused entirely by humans. Traffic collations happen due to a variety of factors such as dangerous roadways, but primarily by our lack of knowledge. One serious violation that people often make is using alcohol drinking before driving. Not only does this infringement cause danger for ourselves but also for the people around us. Besides, driving distraction will also be mentioned as a common cause of traffic accidents and driving over the speed limit and breaking traffic rules are not exceptions. Thus, it may be inferred that even our seemingly minor errors might cause serious effects that could even cost us our lives. 

Prevention of traffic accidents is no longer the responsibility of only the government but all of us. It's time to take action to make driving accidents a thing of the past. Education is the most crucial factor that determines whether a reform effort is successful or not. Children who are the master of the future world have to be taught about road traffic safety at school. As for the grown-ups, there should be a heavy fine for those who break the traffic laws intentionally. There is only one way to change the current situation which is to improve awareness. As a result, we must make every effort to propagate traffic safety knowledge. I firmly believe that, if each of us joins our hands to reduce traffic accidents, then soon we will have a world with zero traffic accidents. 

All in all, traffic accidents are horrible catastrophes that cost both health and wealth. We must try to raise the awareness of the people around us as well as improve ourselves. We have to completely eradicate traffic accidents in order to transform our world into heaven

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