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hoang nguyen27/05/2024
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Nhờ mọi người chấm giúp em bài viết này với ạ

đề: Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Overseas films are received preference rather than local films when it comes to people's movie hobby. There are some primary reasons for this trend. To tackle this problem government should spend more subsidies on developing local film industries.
There are several reasons for those tending to watch foreign films, which are produced overseas. They have an elaborate investment in the whole process, therefore they are almost perfect with a range of factors like professional actors, high technology with real images, and lively background. For example, In Vietnam, people preferred watching 'Avatar' - an overseas movie to “Bogia” - a local movie, when they were released at the same time. To extend that, because of the enormous amount of filmmaking budget, 'avatar' is perfectly finalized with an attractive screenplay, vivid images, and professional actors. This easily impressed the watcher with magnificent scenes. As a result, 'Avatar' apparently became a leading film during that time. By contrast, “Bogia” film had worsened results, and few people were ready to spend their money on enjoying it. Due to its low budget, filmmakers had to minimize expenses sensibly, hence 'Bogia' which was produced with sketchy sets and amateur actors, couldn’t meet the audience’s expectations. To solve this issue and boost the local film industries, the government and relevant organizations play key role in it. Financial support from the government should be launched to film crew, so, they can improve high devices and advanced technologies that are used in creating backgrounds, and enhance their film equipment such as high-quality cameras, sets of lights, recording devices, etc. These film tools contribute to making clarity images and lively movement on the screen. Furthermore, Actors are also pivotal factor which create gripping movies. Therefore, the government should spend their budget on arts and educational organizations. These places would serve the purpose of nurturing talents as well as facilitating an environment for those who could develop their maximum abilities.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the preference for foreign films rather than local films, and the government should give financial assistance to local film screw so that they can attract a lot of people.

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Bùi Thị Phượng22/05/2024
IELTS Writing task 1: The table below shows the consumption of three basic food, rice, wheat, and maize, by people in four different countries.

 The table gives a break down of food usage for three kinds of food in four distinct nations Cambodia, Poland, Egypt and Mexico.  

Overall, Egyptians consume the highest food in all these countries. Additionally, while people residing in Cambodia like eating rice, the reverse was true for maize in Poland. 

Turning to rice, the figure for using rice in Cambodia is the highest at 1145 calories, which is double that in Egypt. Meanwhile, the amount of calories of Mexican account for 57 calories a day, compared to 19% in Poland. In terms of maize, 1080 calories on a daily basis is consumed in Mexico, which is ten times higher than that of Cambodia (at 103 calories). In the same time, the figure for using maize in Egypt is significant higher than that of in Poland, with respective figures being at nearly 580 calories and 0 calories which hit the bottom of consumption in three foods. Regarding wheat, Egyptians have the highest intake of calories of all four countries at 1095, the amount of this food in Cambodia just merely constitutes for 18 calories which is the slowest among all countries listed. The figure for consumption this food in Poland is approximately 870 calories per day, whereas this food stands at 275 calories in Mexico. 

   

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Veroni Id16/05/2024
Nhờ mn chấm giúp em 2 bài writing task 1 dạng map, bọn em thi tháng 7 thì với cách viết hiện tại liệu có 7.0 writing nổi ko ạa


Bài 1:

The given maps detail the current layout of an office building and some proposed changes for its renovation.

Looking at an overall perspective, the future plan will entail major changes regarding the current grass area and office amenities, including more seating spaces and the expansion and relocation of the four offices.

Currently, the main building is flanked by two grass areas. With the proposed redevelopment, these places will be repurposed as an outdoor seating area on the west and a meeting area on the east. The existing WCs will be moved to the northeast corner of the building, accompanied by a coffee machine to further enhance convenience.

While the main corridor will remain largely the same, the four office rooms will be rearranged into two expanded office rooms on the southern part and replace the kitchen and the canteen on the northern side. Following the relocation of the offices, the front entranceway will also be adjusted to the center, facilitating the accessibility of this area. However, the storeroom will still remain.
 

Bài 2:

The maps illustrate some future changes that are proposed for an office building.

Launching into the depiction presented, it becomes evident that the proposed changes will entail the restructuring of offices in the center of the building, accompanied by the addition of outdoor seating and meeting areas.

Looking at the layout of the building as it is now, it can be noted that the main entrance is placed on the right-hand side. The doorway leads to a central corridor flanked by the kitchen, canteen, storeroom and toilet room on one side and four offices on the other. Next in line are the surrounding sectors on both sides of the building, characterized by outdoor grassy areas.

The second map depicts the planned reconfiguration of this existing space. For better accessibility, visitors to the office building will now enter through a new entrance in the center of the building, in between two main offices. Additionally, while the central corridor remains, the current kitchen and canteen are now removed to make way for new office areas. The existing WCs are also moved to the grass area and expanded to incorporate a coffee machine. An outdoor seating area with chairs is introduced on the left side to create a relaxing space for employees. As for the right side of the building, the current empty spaces will be replaced by a large meeting area to further enhance collaboration in the workplace.
 

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Võ Hồng Thi11/05/2024
ebook ielts

Mình đặt ebook đã thanh toán nhưng vẫn chưa gửi về gmail cho mình là sao ạ

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Thanh Tâm Phạm09/05/2024
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Em không hiểu về adj compliment và propositional compliment lắm anh chị có thể giải thích và nêu ví dụ giúp em không ạEm không hiểu về adj compliment và propositional compliment lắm anh chị có thể giải thích và nêu ví dụ giúp em không ạ


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Trịnh Hoàng Mai09/05/2024
Dạ, thầy/cô cho em xin feedback về bài writing task 1 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ.

Vì em có thử up bài lên mấy lần thì nó đều bị lỗi nên em xin phép được để link gg drive ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19HLr3dQI4K4T-enqmlMp7gEAPBTfTYlP-xxf5Lrehas/edit?usp=sharing

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Dhd Gdhd06/05/2024
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