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The given illustrations show the redevelopment of the ground floor in a library throughout a 9-year period, starting from 2001.

A glance at the plans reveals that the arrangement of areas on the ground floor remained unchanged in general. Another noticeable feature is that after 9 years, the library had been modernized and innovated with more amenities. 

Looking at the first illustration, the structure of the ground floor was simple. At the bottom of the picture, there was a librarian's desk opposite the entrance while the stairs were in the right corner of the floor. Moving slightly to the left, there existed bookshelves with merely two types of books: self-help, history, and fiction and each genre had its distinctive area. Unlike these bookshelves, fiction books were located on the other side of the floor, opposite the entrance. Additionally, at the center of the floor was the seating area, divided into 8 small separate squares and put between the history bookshelf and the newspaper and periodicals area. 

After 9 years, the ground floor witnessed certain alterations. From the entrance of the ground, it is apparent that the librarian's desk and the stairs remained in their position. Moving to the west, it can be seen that there were additions of three more genres, called kitchen, economics, and laws, amounting to 6 types of books in total. Each genre laid next to each other, having its specific area. Opposite the bookshelves was the film and DVD area, which was the replacement for the newspaper and periodicals, making the library more modern. Noticeably, the library had become more convenient due to the addition of a new area where people could utilize computers. At the center of the room, the table area remained in its position but was restructured to four rows. Another worth-mentioning feature is that the place which used to be the fiction area had doubled in size and become a new table area, providing seats for people. Nearby was the area where children could be catered for. 

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Task: The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay:
As far as current traffic issues are concerned, it is proposed that residence in cities instead of in the urban vicinity or countryside could alleviate the situation. Although this can prove effective to a certain extent in some cases, it needs more consideration regarding the possible repercussions.

It is reasonable to argue that urban living could ease the stress on the traffic systems in places. One important reason is an increase in city dwellers would drive more investment in improving the transportation infrastructure in cities. Governmental bodies are encouraged to implement more plans to construct modern and convenient road amenities catering to the increasing traveling demand among the residents. Furthermore, the eco-traveling trend is becoming more and more prevalent in cities, thus encouraging its inhabitants to make journeys using more energy-efficient and environmentally friendly vehicles, like bikes and electric underground.

However, it is necessary to notice that fostering the popularity of living in metropolitans might be counter-productive in an attempt to mitigate traffic problems. In light of the fact that towns and cities are already highly populated, a surge in their population would be tantamount to a heavier burden on the traffic system. As a consequence, traffic congestion and other matters would occur without proper and strategic urban planning from the authorities. Furthermore, the proposal of megacity centralization could cause people to suffer from other drawbacks directly resulting from the increasingly restrained area and spaces. For instance, people might face the possibility of unemployment in the context of competitive job markets in metropolitan areas.

In conclusion, while there is evidence indicating the benefits that urbanization could bring to the problems related to transportation, further consideration implies that there are disadvantages underlying this incentive, preventing it from achieving desired outcomes.

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Đề bài: Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many people believe that governments should allocate funds for discovering extraterrestrial life, others argue that such expenditure costs money, considering the issues on our own planet. Although there are many potential benefits of exploration, I lean towards the second opinion.

On the one hand, space exploration can bring good preparation for potential threats. Nowadays, people are facing climate changes and do not know what will happen in the future. Understanding the extraterrestrial environments can prepare us for threats  from space, such as asteroids or harmful cosmic events. Additionally, the discovery of life on other planets proves the scientific advancement and knowledge. Exploring other planets can lead to significant scientific breakthroughs, enhancing our understanding of the universe and potentially leading to technological innovations. For example, thanks to these advancements, people can predict the natural phenomena in the future and give some solutions to deal with these bad phenomena.

On the other hand, allocating funds to space exploration is not justifiable. Governments must handle the urgent issues such as poverty, education and healthcare systems because space exploration is extremely expensive. Governments allocate funds for modern technologies and provide equipment for explorers. Besides, space exploration is a waste of time, so this requires a lot of money for additional expenses for explorers like food and accommodation. Furthermore, the search for extraterrestrial life is highly speculative with no guaranteed results. This potentially leads to wasteful expenditure.

In conclusion, while the search for life on other planets has many advantages, I maintain that addressing the urgent issues on Earth should be prioritized.
 

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

It is true that people who decide their career path early and pursue it for their rest of life are satisfied with it. While I agree that this may suit some people, I believe that individuals changing jobs frequently, also get satisfaction in their working life.
On the one hand, some people having the right decision for their occupations when they were young may be fulfilled with it. They obviously know what they want for their future and which jobs are suitable for themselves when they are young, and attempt hard to gain their career goals. These people, therefore, feel pleasure with these rewards, which are exchanged by much effort and time. Taking doctor occupancy to be an example, people often make decisions to be doctors when they are pupils and they have to try hard on studies for a very long time. For that reason, those dedicate themselves to their jobs till the end of their lives.
On the other hand, people usually changing and seeking new jobs are also satisfied with their works. To begin with, some people who love the newness and flexibility, can not accompany with a certain job in a long period, so they choose changing works frequently to find the new environment and the better opportunities. This is more satisfied for those of employees than having a constant job. Furthermore, altering career frequently allows workers to find suitable jobs, whose conditions and co-workers significantly influence the satisfaction of those people. The healthy work’s conditions enable employee be happy and fulfill with working life.
To sum up, both people who pursue a career path early and who change work frequently, are equally satisfied with their professions.

 

hãy vẽ sơ đồ tư duy về peer pressure gồm có phần good và bad 

sau khi làm bài test năng lực ielts thì cỡ bao lâu là có điểm ạ?

Viết câu complex sentences cho mỗi bức tranh 

"Firstly, we can help by reducing pollution."
Underline one word that contains a prefix in this sentence. 

Right now I'm confused between "firstly" and "reducing", can you answer me this question?

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