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Đào Thị Phương06/06/2023
Writing task 2

Chào thầy cô và các bạn, có thẻ thầy cô giúp em chữa bài writing 1 lần được ko ạ? Em muốn biết bài này đang ở level nào, em cần học gì để bổ trợ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?

A wide range of people think that it is essential for retired people to sustain to get the opportunity and start working if they are able to have ability. From my point of view, I truly believe that some suitable jobs give to elderly people a sense of the satisfaction and comfort.

First of all, it is clarified that elder people will find happiness in works such as watering plants in the park or delivering newspaper in the morning or even taking care of the baby. They usually intend to wake up early due to their age. If there is no work from them, they can feel a bit boring. They can find the pleasure for their hobby job.

In addition, nowadays, more and more older people do not desire to have dependencies on anyone else. They always willing to support the young people, and definitely they want to get earn for their living. They can find a great deal of jobs which are suitable for them. For this reason, they can not only help to increase significant income for their family and this assists their children/their son/their daughter to decrease the anxiety of financial problems but also help to decrease the using money of governments in retirement period.

In conclusion, it is understandable why it will be better if elder people are able to do a job. In reality, there are a number of opportunities for them to find slight job in the Internet without pressure. Hence, they can support each others in the current life.




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Trương Chi Linh04/06/2023
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Dương Phi Hiểu My03/06/2023
IELTS WRITING
Topic: The advantages ans disadvantages of technological devices
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Thanks to the developments of technology, many kinds of products are available and affordable to people. Things lead to a lot of benefits. However, they also cause many problems to users. The following essays will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of electronic devices.
First of all, labor productivity is increased with the help of electronic equipment. Technology can automate the workflow of almost function in a business such as finance, marketing, and operations. For example, in the past, without technology, restaurants must take customers' orders by hand on paper and then invoice them on it manually. With technology, all the paperwork is standardized and streamlined. Now, we can easily place an order on tablet. The invoice is generated by a lick and the revenue reports can send to the manager automatically. Secondly, technology has helped us in giving a better mode of communication. With a lick on a button, you can send messages, emails or make calls. Now, you do not need to write letters or travel for a long distance if you are missing your family or friends. Do a video call and get closer to your lovers.
Alongside with the benefits, there are also potential health consequences that should be considered. Users may face problems with their physical health if they spend to much time on technological equipment. Gluing eyes at an electronic gadget for long periods can lead to near-sighted as well as neck and back pain. Laptop and smartphone usage can involve young people sitting in positions consistently, which may increase their risk of obesity. Another serious outcome of internet-connected devices is the risk of losing personal information. Sharing even a single piece of information online certainly increases the chance that it may fall into the hands of hackers, criminals. They can use this data to hack your computer, your bank accounts, and a lot of more.
In conclusion, electronic devices have their own positive and negative aspects. To make the best benefit of it, people should use it wisely and in moderation.
 
 
 
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Vũ Thị Phương Anh02/06/2023
Paraphrasing

Em chào thầy cô ạ. Em đang làm cuốn Pre- IELTS course - writing sentences về phần paraphrasing và có 2 câu này em không biết làm ạ. Em mong thầy cô giải giúp em ạ:

1. Yêu cầu: thay đổi dạng từ hoặc dùng từ đồng nghĩa để viết lại câu sau: "Each person should be responsible for their impacts on the environment. "

2. Yêu cầu: Viết lại câu với ý nghĩa không đổi bằng cách danh từ hóa động từ & tính từ: "Parent organizations are demanding healthier food in schools, and this results in growing concerns about chilhood obesity."

Em xin cam on ah!!

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Caroline 01/06/2023
Nhờ thầy cô cho điểm bài viết Task 2 Chủ đề Family History

Đề bài: In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one's own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development? 

Essay: 

In some parts of the world, it is more and more common to expand one's horizons of family background. People want to do this in several reasons, and I am of the opinion that it is a beneficial phenomenon.

There are several driving factors why people want to do this. Firstly, lots of people want to gain an insight into their family background because of their curiosity. Studying this may develop a strong sense of who they really are, they might have a deeper understanding of their own identities, included their own culture from their grandparents' day.

It is a beneficial phenomenon because of two main contributors. First and foremost, as they could have a thorough insight into their family culture, they tend to preserve valuable family traditions, so it could keep for generations. Besides, when people in their family understand of their family background, everyone would have the same topic to talk during family gatherings. 

In conclusion, there are many reasons related to this, and this tendency should enhance more and more, becoming an own tradition in each family. 

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Huỳnh Thị Ngọc Hà01/06/2023
Listening
cho em xin một vài trang web luyện nghe chép chính tả với ạ
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Huỳnh Thị Ngọc Hà01/06/2023
Listening
Cho rm xin một vài trabg web luyện nghe chép chính tả với ạ

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Khoa Nguyễn Đăng31/05/2023
Thi thử Toeic SW

Mình muốn đăng ký thi thử Toeic SW có đống phí ở đâu ạ

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Phạm Thị Minh Mẫn28/05/2023
trang web tiếng anh
thầy cô cho em hỏi có trang web nào tra được gia đình từ ko ạ
ví dụ:
environment (n)
=> environmental (a), adv, v 
em cám ơn ạ
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Trúc Mai26/05/2023
Would you like to have dinner with me?

A: “Would you like to have dinner with me?” - B: “_____”.

1
0%
2Yes, it is
0%
3Yes, so do I
3.53%
4Yes, I'd love to
96.47%
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