Em chào thầy cô ạ. Em đang làm cuốn Pre- IELTS course - writing sentences về phần paraphrasing và có 2 câu này em không biết làm ạ. Em mong thầy cô giải giúp em ạ:

1. Yêu cầu: thay đổi dạng từ hoặc dùng từ đồng nghĩa để viết lại câu sau: "Each person should be responsible for their impacts on the environment. "

2. Yêu cầu: Viết lại câu với ý nghĩa không đổi bằng cách danh từ hóa động từ & tính từ: "Parent organizations are demanding healthier food in schools, and this results in growing concerns about chilhood obesity."

Em xin cam on ah!!

Đề bài: In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one's own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development? 

Essay: 

In some parts of the world, it is more and more common to expand one's horizons of family background. People want to do this in several reasons, and I am of the opinion that it is a beneficial phenomenon.

There are several driving factors why people want to do this. Firstly, lots of people want to gain an insight into their family background because of their curiosity. Studying this may develop a strong sense of who they really are, they might have a deeper understanding of their own identities, included their own culture from their grandparents' day.

It is a beneficial phenomenon because of two main contributors. First and foremost, as they could have a thorough insight into their family culture, they tend to preserve valuable family traditions, so it could keep for generations. Besides, when people in their family understand of their family background, everyone would have the same topic to talk during family gatherings. 

In conclusion, there are many reasons related to this, and this tendency should enhance more and more, becoming an own tradition in each family. 

Cho em hỏi , hôm em đi thi nghe nói thứ 4 này sẽ có điểm, nhưng hôm nay vẫn chưa thấy. Em có nhắn bên zalo hỏi AC cũng chưa được giải đáp. Thế thì em phải liên hệ với ai để hỏi ạ?

Cho em hỏi , hôm em đi thi nghe nói thứ 4 này sẽ có điểm, nhưng hôm nay vẫn chưa thấy. Em có nhắn bên zalo hỏi AC cũng chưa được giải đáp. Thế thì em phải liên hệ với ai để hỏi ạ?

sửa giúp em task 1

the maps demontrate a large quantity of changes which took place in Art Gallery over the course of 18 years, starting from 2005.

overall, the art gallery witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the replacement of exhibition room 4 for children's area and temporaryexhibition. there are also several differences in terms of the layout of the building ramp for wheelchair

looking at the drawing more closely, it can be seen that in 2000, there was an exhibition room 4 at the bottom left hand corner of the gallery has been replaced by a temporary exhibition and children's area. besides, gallery office and cafe in the north of the exhibition room 4 is now used to for vending machine and cafe 

the area for stairs was narrowed to make room for lift. while the place for exhibition room 1,2 and 3 have remained intact over the years.