Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 – Đề thi ngày 30/3/2017

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
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The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 Band 7

It has been argued that a comprehensive prohibition of advertising in all forms brings about great values for society as a whole reportedly due to its uselessness or sometimes harmfulness. In my opinion, this assumption is a highly subjective point of view, and therefore I completely disagree with it.

It is, for starters, ill-founded to claim that commercials are purposeless and detrimental to consumers. We are living in a world where new products with distinct and revolutionary features to better our lives and solve problems that we used to think of as unraveled matters come into being almost every day. And we cannot ignore the fact that those products would remain unknown unless advertising of various types disseminated needed information to reach as many customers as possible. Businesses who thrive as a consequence will pay taxes so that the government can carry out a variety of functions, such as social security and education, to ensure the well-being of everyone.

From another perspective, dependency on the advertising industry is inevitable for any nation to prosper. Once commercials, by law, undergo a prohibitive order, unemployment rates would increase and the burden would fall on the state. For example, Coca Cola dispenses thousands of employment opportunities in advertising throughout its branches across different regions in the world. If adverts are forbidden, an unthinkable number of workers, such as marketers, would either be driven to other jobs or stay unemployed. The government, as a result, have to provide temporary financial support for those people. In other words, banning any forms of commercial communication would lead to reverse and undesirable implications on society.

In conclusion, it is unreasonable to presume that it is for the sake of everyone’s interests that advertisements which, according to many, are irrelevant to their lives have to be prohibited.

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Từ vựng IELTS theo chủ đề

  1. Purposeless and detrimental to consumers: Không có mục đích cũng như có hại cho người tiêu dùng
  2. Come into being: Xuất hiện
  3. Remain unknown: Không ai biết
  4. Disseminate needed information: Lan tỏa những thông tin cần thiết
  5. To reach as many customers as possible: Với tới càng nhiều khách hàng càng tốt
  6. Undergo a prohibitive order: Trải qua một lệnh cấm
  7. Dispense thousands of employment opportunities: Phân phát hàng ngàn cơ hội việc làm
  8. Provide temporary financial support: Cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính tạm thời

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