Bài mẫu IELTS Writing ngày 4/3/2017

Topic

Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 Band 7

There is a difference of opinions on what kind of help is more necessary for third world countries. In my view, support in the form of money shows less practicality than other types of useful aid and consultancy.

On the one hand, I understand why some people argue it is best to provide financial assistance for developing countries. Firstly, external monetary flow enables executive bodies of those countries to carry out a variety of functions, for example infrastructural development, social healthcare, water and power supplies. This would help avoid stagnation and foster economic progress. Secondly, when state income from taxes is inadequate, foreign cash injections are vital to maintain effective administration systems by paying standard salaries for governmental staff members who play supervisory roles in all sections of a nation.

On the other hand, I would side with those who believe other forms of assistance should be given. Sustainable growth does not merely depend on money, but on how a country is governed and directed, particularly diplomacy and the resolution of concerning internal issues like poverty, crime, or unemployment. In this spectrum, less developed countries certainly do not have enough experience, which emphasizes the need for direction and consultancy from experienced organizations. Furthermore, even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development. However, scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.

In conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, it seems to me that instead of monetarily assisting poor countries, global help should come in other forms such as advice and training courses.

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Từ vựng IELTS theo chủ đề

1. Third world countries: những nước đang phát triển
2. Consultancy: tư vấn
3. To provide financial assistance: cung cấp sự hỗ trợ về mặt tiền bạc
4. External monetary flow: dòng tiền từ nước ngoài
5. Executive bodies: những cơ quan hành pháp
6. Infrastructural development: sự phát triển cơ sở hạ tầng
7. Stagnation: sự trì trệ
8. To foster economic progress: đẩy mạnh phát triển kinh tế
9. Foreign cash injections: lượng tiền hỗ trợ từ nước ngoài
10. Administration systems: hệ thống điều hành
11. To play supervisory roles in: đóng vai trò quản lý
12. Diplomacy: ngoại giao
13. The resolution of concerning internal issues: sự giải quyết những vấn đề đáng lo ngại trong nước
14. Professional and systematic education and training programs: những chương trình đào tạo và giáo dục bài bản và chuyên nghiệp