Bài mẫu IELTS Writing cho chủ đề Governmental policies ngày 09/05/2020

Đề bài mẫu và phân tích chủ đề Governmental policies

Đề bài

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Phân tích chủ đề Governmental policies

• Chủ đề: Governmental policies.

• Key words: private companies, the government, scientific research.

• Dạng bài: advantages and disadvantages.

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Cấu trúc bài viết

Bài mẫu tham khảo

Nowadays, most scientific studies are financed and carried out by private enterprises instead of the governing bodies. In my opinion, the benefits of this are greater than its drawbacks.

On the one hand, that research is paid and conducted by private companies can be greatly beneficial. In fact, unlike governmental organizations, most companies’ primary objectives are profits, so their motivation to minimize the costs arising upon research activities is much more considerable. Therefore, they tend to prevent their scientists and other workers more strictly from wasting any resources, including time and money; as a result, their outcomes can be quicker and more money-efficient. In addition, when the government leaves scientific research for businesses, the financial pressure on the national budget can be partly relieved. Instead, it can be allocated for investing in other important sectors such as education or transportation.

On the other hand, I believe that letting private businesses sponsor or undertake such studies will bring about more significant disadvantages. First, there are very few private companies that are willing to do unpaid work while shouldering a huge financial burden at the same time. Consequently, they may require the public to pay to access or share their research results, so that they can afford to cover their expenses as well as to ensure their personal incomes. Second, when allowing companies to do scientific research, the authorities can hardly make sure the entire research process is under supervision. It is possible that companies with the top priority being maximizing profits will sell their research to other organizations, such as terrorists or criminals,  who take advantage of such research to harm society.

In conclusion, I claim that private investment in and conduct of scientific research may result in several advantages which are, however, outweighed by the undesirable consequences.