Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 band 7 ngày 21/04/2022

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 21/04/2022

The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.

Dàn bài chi tiết

Bài mẫu tham khảo

The given line graph demonstrates fruit production in 4 countries: France, Spain, Germany and Turkey between 1970 and 2010.

Overall, it can be seen that the amount of fruit produced in Turkey underwent a gradual increase during the period, while the opposite was true for Germany. In addition, the figure for Spain was always highest from 1970 to 2010.

Spain supplied the most fruit (5,5 million tonnes) in 1970, whereas only 2,5 million tonnes of fruit were made in Germany. In 1980, fruit production in Spain rose to 6 million tonnes, which was the highest number during the period. This figure then gradually decreased and hit its bottom at 5 million tonnes. In 1990, fruit production in Germany hit the lowest point at 1,5 million tonnes, then remained stable for 10 years before slightly dropping for 0,25 million tonnes in 2010.

In 1970, the amount of fruit made in France was the lowest number during the period. Fruit production in France reduced in 2000 before significantly jumping to nearly 3 million tonnes at the end of the period. During the period, fruit manufacture in Turkey gradually increased and reached 3,5 million tonnes in 2010.

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Cấu trúc câu

• In 1980, fruit production in Spain rose to 6 million tonnes, which was the highest number during the period.

• In 1990, fruit production in Germany hit the lowest point at 1,5 million tonnes, then remained stable for 10 years before slightly dropping for 0,25 million tonnes in 2010.

• During the period, fruit manufacture in Turkey gradually increased and reached 3,5 million tonnes in 2010.

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 21/04/2022

Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Các đề bài liên quan

• The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: khi trẻ em phạm tội, cha mẹ nên bị phạt 

• Nhiệm vụ: Bày tỏ quan điểm đối với vấn đề trên

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:

  • Children who break the law: trẻ em phạm pháp

  • Parents are responsible for their children’s action: cha mẹ chịu trách nhiệm cho hành động của con cái

  • Parents should be punished: cha mẹ nên bị phạt 

Dàn bài

Các ý tưởng nếu không đồng ý với quan điểm đề bài có thể sử dụng: Phạm tội do gen duy truyền không phải vấn đề cha mẹ có thể kiểm soát được → Cha mẹ không nên phải chịu trách nhiệm.

Bài mẫu

It is argued that parents should be responsible or even punished for crimes committed by their children. While juvenile delinquency may be due to parents’ failure in raising their children, I believe that teenage lawbreakers should take all accountability for their offenses. 

More often than not, children’s anti-social behaviors could be traced back to a dysfunctional family with abusive parents, divorced parents or parents who put too much academic pressure on their children. These generally share one feature in common which is a lack of care toward children’s emotions. Due to this unhappy childhood, children become more vulnerable to cognitive distortion; they tend to think more negatively, feel worthless, and consider social offenses a way to prove their worth to the world. Indeed, statistics agree that many juvenile offenders have experienced emotional crises due to their broken families, which leads to their anti-social attitudes. As several roots of evils committed by children are from parents’ failure to raise their kids with love, parents should be partly accountable for their children’s illegal behaviors.

Nevertheless, I insist that the lawbreakers themselves, not their parents, should be punished to ensure a justice system based on fairness and criminal deterrence. Firstly, it is unjust for offenders to escape legal punishment and continue their normal lives despite harming society. Punishment is to let them understand the price for their actions, and could vary, depending on the seriousness of the behavior. Secondly, the threat of being punished would deter the risk of other teenages’ committing anti-social behaviors. This will make society a safer and more peaceful place.

In conclusion, although parents play a part in their children’s wrongdoings, they should not take major or all responsibility for that. It is suggested to punish juvenile lawbreakers as a way to ensure a just legal system and alleviate the risk of potential criminals.

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Từ vựng (không quá 10 từ/cụm từ)

• juvenile delinquency: tội phạm thanh thiếu niên

• lawbreakers: kẻ phạm pháp

• take all accountability for: chịu toàn bộ trách nhiệm cho

• anti-social behaviors: các hành vi chống đối xã hội

• dysfunctional family: gia đình bất hòa

• cognitive distortion: lối suy nghĩ méo mó

• justice system: hệ thống luật pháp

• criminal deterrence: răn đe tội phạm

• unjust (adj) bất công

• alleviate the risk of potential crimes: giảm nguy cơ phạm tội 

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