Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 band 7 ngày 25/06/2022
Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 25/06/2022
Đề bài: The table below shows the questionnaire about opinions of club members and general public for the new theatre in one town in 2012.
Facilities | Excellent | Satisfied | Poor |
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Club members | 72% | 26% | 2% |
General public | 64% | 24% | 8% |
Information | Excellent | Satisfied | Poor |
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Club members | 54% | 30% | 16% |
General public | 66% | 20% | 14% |
Quality | Excellent | Satisfied | Poor |
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Club members | 88% | 10% | 2% |
General public | 53% | 40% | 7% |
Dàn bài
Mở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của bảng số liệu |
Đoạn tổng quát |
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Thân bài 1 | Số liệu của club members:
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Thân bài 2 | Số liệu của general public:
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Bài mẫu
The given table shows the survey results from club members and the general public regarding an unspecified town's new theatre in 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the vast majority of opinions were ranked excellent in all three categories, whereas only a small percentage of survey participants ranked any category as poor.
In terms of club members, 72% found the theatre facilities to be excellent, while 26% were satisfied and 2% said they were poor. Meanwhile, 54% of members said the theatre information was excellent, while around one-third were only satisfied. The quality of the theatre was ranked as excellent by 88% of the members, while 10% were satisfied, and 2% ranked them to be poor.
On the other hand, 64% of the general public ranked the facilities as excellent, with only 24% merely satisfied. Furthermore, two-thirds of the public thought the information was excellent, while 20% were only satisfied. Additionally, while 53% of the public thought the quality was excellent, 7% ranked it as poor.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
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Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 25/06/2022
Đề bài: Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people, like the homeless and unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Các đề bài liên quan
Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Phân tích đề
Phạm vi chủ đề: Viện trợ quốc tế
Nhiệm vụ: Đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân.
Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:
International aid: viện trợ quốc tế
Homeless: vô gia cư
Unemployed: thất nghiệp
Dàn bài
Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng
Agree | Disagree |
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Bài mẫu
Some people believe that governments should not be contributing foreign aid while they have their own underprivileged citizens, such as those who are homeless or jobless. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are several reasons why some people might believe that the government should prioritise their own citizens over helping other nations. Firstly, not all countries have a generous enough budget to invest in international aid, so they should prioritise the welfare of their own citizens. It is possible to find impoverished people in even the most developed countries, and it would take a large sum of money to help them all climb their way out of poverty. Moreover, resources for international aid can be allocated to help a country promote its own economic growth instead. For example, many factories could be built across the country, thus creating more job opportunities and facilitating revenue growth.
Although I can understand the above arguments, I still think that it is necessary for governments to provide foreign assistance. In some countries, people are facing problems which can easily be solved with the help of other countries. For instance, just a few packets of rice can save many people from dying of starvation. Furthermore, countries can dramatically improve international relations through international aid, leading to greater cooperation between nations. Also, spending money on such a program can help address global issues that will affect all nations, such as climate change and migration, because people are less likely to move abroad or destroy forests to make way for agriculture when their living standards are improved.
In conclusion, I believe that countries should help each other for humanitarian purposes as well as their own development.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
Từ vựng
foreign aid: viện trợ nước ngoài
underprivileged (a): nghèo, thiệt thòi
a generous budget: một ngân sách lớn/hào phóng
prioritize (v): ưu tiên
impoverished (a): nghèo khổ
climb their way out of poverty: thoát nghèo
allocated (v): phân bổ
facilitating revenue growth: tạo điều kiện tăng trưởng doanh thu
foreign assistance: viện trợ nước ngoài
starvation (n): nạn đói
international relations: quan hệ quốc tế
living standards: mức sống
humanitarian purposes: mục đích nhân đạo
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