Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và task 2 band 7 ngày 26/03/2022
Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 26/03/2022
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
Mở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của bản đồ |
Đoạn tổng quát (Overview) | Bảo tàng và khu vực xung quanh không có sự thay đổi nào lớn, trừ sự mở rộng của bãi xe và quán cà phê được xây. |
Thân bài 1 | Miêu tả sự thay đổi trong lô đất của bảo tàng:
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Thân bài 2 | Miêu tả sự thay đổi bên ngoài bảo tàng:
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Bài mẫu
The maps present how a small museum and its nearby area had changed from 1990 to 2010. In general, the museum area had not undergone many dramatic changes, except for the expansion of the car park and the introduction of a new cafe.
The exhibition room opposite the main entrance of the museum used to be an L-shaped building in 1990, but later it had been demolished to make way for the expansion of the shop, located to the left of the entrance. There were two separate exhibition rooms in 1990, but they were combined in 2010 to create one big building. Besides these, lying perpendicular to the merged exhibition rooms and next to the one facing the main entrance, the restaurant remained untouched throughout the period.
In 1990, there was a large garden to the left of the museum, and this remained unchanged in 2010. The cottage to the right of the museum had been replaced by a new cafe in 2010. The car park located opposite the garden in 1990 had been expanded 20 years later thanks to the clearance of the garden.
Từ vựng
undergo many dramatic changes: trải qua nhiều sự thay đổi đáng kể
the introduction of something: sự thêm vào, xây mới của cái gì đó
an L-shaped building: toà nhà hình chữ L
make way for: nhường chỗ cho
perpendicular to: vuông góc với
merged (adj): kết hợp lại
the clearance of something: sự xoá sạch của
Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 26/03/2022
Đề bài: Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Các đề bài liên quan
Nowadays, people spend more and more time away from their family. Why? What effect will it have on themselves and their family?
Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this? Does this affect parents or children more?
Phân tích đề
Phạm vi chủ đề: Con người sống xa gia đình vì công việc
Nhiệm vụ:
Thảo luận mặt lợi và mặt hại của vấn đề
Đưa ra quan điểm mặt nào trội hơn
Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:
Move away from friends and families for work: rời xa bạn bè và gia đình vì công việc
Dàn bài
Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng
Điểm lợi | Điểm bất lợi |
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Bài mẫu
These days, many people are willing to sacrifice the chance to stay near their families and friends to relocate for work. While this may have certain drawbacks, from my perspective, the benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, people who move away from families and friends are more at the risk of enduring mental health problems. Physical distance usually discourages them from confiding their troubles to their loved ones. This is often the case of migrant workers who keep their suffering to themselves just to ease their families’ worries. Consequently, they are more vulnerable to mental health issues, such as depression, while their families and friends at home remain unaware. This circumstance could even get worse if these people are introverts who tend to distance themselves from their new colleagues.
On the other hand, for those relocating for a job, they are more likely to achieve career fulfillment. For one thing, there are often better career prospects available outside their hometown to people of working ages. Bigger cities or countries are hubs of various industries, which promise more career choices and significantly higher wages. Therefore, it is far easier for people to find a suitable job. Secondly, this can help people, especially those who have just reached adulthood, advance their careers faster. Living with parents could indeed trigger emotional issues because of family conflicts, which could negatively influence their work performance. Without that potential disturbance, young people can wholeheartedly devote themselves to their work and thrive.
In conclusion, because of work, more people are living away from families and friends, which has both advantages and disadvantages, and I believe that this is more beneficial to individuals.
Từ vựng
Career prospects: Triển vọng nghề nghiệp
Be a hub of something: Trung tâm hoạt động của cái gì
Step out of their comfort zone: Bước ra khỏi vùng an toàn
Stand on their own: tự lập
Sacrifice: hy sinh
relocate for a job: chuyển nơi ở vì công việc
career fulfillment: sự thỏa mãn trong sự nghiệp
Family conflicts: mâu thuẫn gia đình
work performance: biểu hiện trong công việc
Disturbance: phiền phức
devote themselves to: tận tâm làm gì
confiding their troubles to: thổ lộ vấn đề của họ với ai
migrant workers: người lao động xuất khẩu
ease someone’s worries: làm dịu đi lo lắng của ai
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