Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 30/04/2022
Đề bài: The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given flow chart illustrates how soft cheese is made.
In general, it can be seen that there are five stages in this process, starting with milk blended together with water and ending with the final product all set to be consumed.
In the first stage, milk is mixed well with fresh water. Then, this mixture is ready for the second step, which is the refrigerating process. At this stage, milk and water are stored in a specific cooling equipment that continues to blend and freezes the mixture at 5 Celsius degrees at the same time. After 2 hours, salt is added and the liquid is now brought to the fermentation stage where this mixture gets heated up constantly for 6 hours.
Having been completely fermented, this liquid then lets off its steam via evaporation using more heat, which is up to 100 Celsius degrees. After an 8-hour evaporation stage, the mixture becomes a thick liquid and is put to chill at 5 Celsius degrees for 6 hours. In the final stage, wastewater and soft cheese are sorted out via a special filter.
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In the first stage
Having completely fermented
After an 8-hour evaporation stage
Then, this mixture is ready for the second step
Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/04/2022
Đề bài: Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
Phân tích đề
Phạm vi chủ đề: người trẻ nên được yêu cầu làm việc tình nguyện không công
Đưa ra ưu điểm và nhược điểm của việc này
Kết luận ưu điểm hay nhược điểm chiếm ưu thế
Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:
unpaid work: là hình thức lao động không được trả công
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It is argued that young adults must get involved in the local community without getting paid. While there are several benefits to such activities, these are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Though young people do not receive any kind of direct remuneration, doing volunteer work may help them mentally prepare for the life of an adult. Firstly, teenage volunteers may learn to become more responsible. Most people at these ages are still heavily reliant on their parents and teachers. Therefore, taking part in community work means they are entering a new work environment with little supervision of parents and teachers; in other words, they are given a chance to stand on their own. Furthermore, helping other people can make their lives more fulfilled. It is true that the need to contribute and be recognized is universal and should not be limited to adults, and for teens through community work, this need can be met.
However, the benefits appear less significant than the drawbacks. On the one hand, many teenagers are already burned out with schoolwork and homework, which are as demanding as a full-time job. If they are obliged to do unpaid work, this can create a negative impression that their life is nothing but duties. This suggests that the rest of their time should be spent on their hobbies to help them find school-life balance. On the other hand, as students’ time and capacity is still limited, society only gains insignificant benefit from their contribution to community work. What they can support the community at this point may be just some simple paperwork and errands, and two hours of volunteering a week, for instance, is not enough to make a change.
In conclusion, though it can benefit young adults to do unpaid community service to some extent, this should not be made compulsory for all.
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remuneration (n) phần thưởng, sự khen thưởng
heavily reliant: phụ thuộc nhiều
supervision (n) sự giám sát
burned out: kiệt sức
school-life balance: cân bằng giữa trường học và cuộc sống
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