Giải đề IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 ngày 05/11/2022

Phân tích đề, các bước lập dàn bài, bài mẫu IELTS Writing task 1 và task 2 kèm từ vựng ghi điểm cho đề thi thật ngày 05/11/2022
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Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 05/11/2022

The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use.
image-altDàn bài

Mở bài

Giới thiệu nội dung chính của biểu đồ

Đoạn tổng quát (Overview)

  • Lượng truy cập website ở first year cao hơn, đạt đỉnh ở các tháng 10 và 2.

Thân bài 1

Tháng 7-10:

  • Tháng 7: First year cao hơn second year khoảng 5,000 visits

  • Tháng 10: First year tăng 15,000 visits đạt mốc cao nhất

  • Second year giảm còn 10,000 visits vào tháng 9, tăng trở lại vào tháng 10

Thân bài 2

Tháng 11-6:

  • Tháng 11-2: First year tăng trong khi second year dao động

  • Tháng 4: Cả 2 đều đạt mức thấp nhất trước khi tăng trở lại

Bài mẫu

The bar chart compares the volume of users visiting a community website over two years.

Overall, website traffic was significantly higher in the first year, with the peak number of visits occurring in October and February.

In July of the first year, the number of users visiting the community website reached 25,000, which was around 5,000 higher than July in the second year. This figure continued to rise over the following months, peaking at 40,000 visits in October. During the same period of the second year, website traffic trended in the opposite direction, dropping to around 10,000 visits in September before increasing back to 20,000 visits in October. 

From November to February, the volume of users visiting in the first year gradually increased, while it fluctuated over the same period in the second year. In April, the figure for both the first and second year hit its lowest point at 16,000 and 8,000 visits respectively before starting to increase again. 

Band điểm ước lượng

TR: 8

CC: 8

LR: 8

GRA: 8

Overall: 8.0

Các cấu trúc dùng để diễn tả số liệu

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  • the peak number of

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  • higher than

  • continued to rise

  • peaking at

  • trended in the opposite direction

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Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 05/11/2022

Đề bài: In many countries large amounts of food are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

Các để bài liên quan

  • Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

  • Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

Dàn bài

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Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng

Nguyên nhân

Giải pháp

Nhiều người không lập danh sách những đồ ăn thiết yếu, dẫn đến mua những thực phẩm không cần thiết

Lập danh sách đồ ăn cần thiết khi mua hàng, tránh việc lãng phí đồ ăn

Bài mẫu

Food waste is an ongoing issue in many countries around the world these days. The following essay will examine some of the main factors contributing to this problem whilst outlining a number of feasible measures to combat the issue. 

There are two main underlying reasons as to why food is being wasted. Firstly, given the vast improvements in agricultural technology, farming has become more mechanized, which has boosted productivity and significantly increased harvests. In addition, freight and logistics processes have also been improved, leading to more cost-efficient transportation and distribution of foods. As a result, the price of food in supermarkets and restaurants is more affordable, making it easier than ever for customers to purchase excess quantities of food. Secondly, it seems that most people haven't cultivated an appreciation for food. Although food is a bare necessity, many people these days tend to take it for granted. 

Several feasible measures can be implemented to mitigate food waste. To begin with, campaigns to raise public awareness about the need to reduce food waste should be intensified. Once people are more aware of the seriousness of the issue, they may think twice before buying and ordering excess amounts of food. Such an initiative should be implemented in tandem with imposing strict laws that forbid food waste at restaurants. This can be accomplished by fining diners who order too many items but are unable to finish them. As a result, consumers will consider what they will order more carefully in the future. 

In conclusion, more affordable food prices and a lack of appreciation for food are reasons for this problem and solutions should be adopted to remedy the situation.

Band điểm ước lượng

TR:8

LR:8

CC:8

GR:8

Overall:8

Từ vựng:

  • an ongoing issue: một vấn đề đang diễn ra.

  • combat: ngăn chặn.

  • underlying reasons: lý do cơ bản.

  • excess quantities of: số lượng dư thừa của.

  • bare necessity: nhu cầu cơ bản nhất.

  • take it for granted: xem là điều hiển nhiên.

  • implement: thực hiện.

  • intensify: tăng cường.

  • in tandem with: song song với.

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