Giải đề IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 ngày 13/10/2022

Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 13/10/2022

Đề bài: The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume.

Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The diagram provides an illustration of how essential oil is used in a perfumery manufacturing system to produce perfume.

Overall, it can be seen that the given process consists of four main stages, starting from the boiling of the input water and ending with the culmination of the refined hydrolat.

The production of perfume begins with a water container being placed over a heat source using fire. The boiling water evaporates releasing hot steam which will be transferred to the second container via an extraction tube. At this stage, steam is used to increase the temperature of aromatic plants, letting the raw materials produce oil then trap the mixture of steam and oil vapor within. 

The production process continues with the vaporized oil being transported to a condenser cell where this product is condensed and delivered using a spring-shaped tube. At the same time, on both ends of the cell contains hot and cold water supplied from two different tubes to support the condensing process. At the last step, water mixed with essential oil will be transported to a separator that filters the oil, allowing hydrolat, known as aromatic water, to culminate via an extraction tube.

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• The production of perfume begins with

• At this stage

• The production process continues with

• At the same time

• At the last step

Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 13/10/2022

Đề bài: Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past.

Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Các đề bài liên quan

• Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

• Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: Communication & Language

• Nhiệm vụ: Trả lời 2 câu hỏi trong đề bài: 

  • Nguyên nhân hiện tượng từ đâu?

  • Thay đổi mang lại nhiều lợi ích hay tác hại hơn?

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: written language: ngôn ngữ viết, văn viết

Dàn bài

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Bài mẫu

In this day, the written language of many individuals has become more informal and spontaneous. There are certain causes which lead to this development, and the drawbacks may outweigh the benefits.

On the one hand, there are several factors that can give rise to the change in people’s writing behavior. Firstly, instead of spending hours selecting advanced academic vocabulary and grammatical structures, which seems to consume a great amount of time, using informal written language is clearly more time-saving. Thus, this may significantly improve writing speed and allow people to converse more effectively in this hectic lifestyle. In addition, some individuals believe that less formal written language could also reduce the tension and unwanted serious tone when it comes to communicating with friends and relatives in writing conversations. For instance, when composing text messages, it is common to adjust the language to a more simple and relaxed way.

On the other hand, the use of a more casual and spontaneous written language could result in more negative impacts. There are specific situations when formal writing should be a must, such as making proposal letters or curriculum vitae. However, if the writer applies the casual tone to those types of document, the final result will be considered improper and end up being neglected. What is more, the way of writing in a relaxed style would seriously damage the uniqueness of traditional literature in the long run. With the appearance of slang and jargon, it can be seen that the art of classic literature is deteriorating day by day.

To sum up, the development of less formal written language could be attributed to time efficiency and intimate communicative contexts. From my view, this change in many people’s writing behavior would bring about more disadvantages than advantages. 

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Từ vựng

• written language: ngôn ngữ viết

• hectic (a): năng động

• tension (n): sự nặng nề

• be a must: quan trọng, cấp thiết

• proposal letter: thư đề nghị

• curriculum vitae: sơ yếu lí lịch

• traditional literature: văn học truyền thống

• in the long run: về lâu dài

• slang and jargon: ngôn ngữ tiếng lóng