Giải đề IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 ngày 08/10/2022

Phân tích đề, các bước lập dàn bài, bài mẫu IELTS Writing task 1 và task 2 kèm từ vựng ghi điểm cho đề thi thật ngày 08/10/2022
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Tác giả

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Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 08/10/2022

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

Group

2011

2012

Percentage of change

All ages

4,381,269

4,410,284

+ 0.6%

Under 15

898,160

896,364

- 0.2%

15-39

1,577,256

1,574,102

- 0.2%

40-64

1,331,907

1,339,898

+ 0.6%

65+

573,946

596,903

+ 4.0%

Dàn bài

Mở bài

Giới thiệu nội dung chính của bảng số liệu

Đoạn tổng quát

Dân số mọi lứa tuổi có xu hướng tăng

Thân bài 1

All ages, 40-64 và 65+

  • All ages và 40-64: tăng 0,6%

  • 65+: tăng 4% 

Thân bài 2

Under 15 và 15-39: giảm 0,2%

Bài mẫu

The table displays population figures for New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.

Overall, the New Zealand population increased slightly over the measured years. Additionally, while the figures for those aged under 40 decreased, there was an increase in figures for those aged 40 and over.  

From 2011 to 2012, the total population in New Zealand rose by 0.6%, from 4,381,269 to 4,410,284 people. While the number of people aged 65+ saw the biggest increase, rising 4% from 573,946 to 596,903, the number of people aged 40-64 years old increased by 0.6%, rising from 1,331,907 to 1,339,898,

Meanwhile, though decreasing by 0.2%, those aged 15-39 made up the largest portion of the population in both years, at 1,577,256 and 1,574,102 respectively. Similarly, the figure for people aged under 15 years old also decreased by 0.2%, dropping from 898,160 to 896,364 people respectively.

Band điểm ước lượng

TR: 8

CC: 8

LR: 8

GRA: 8

Overall: 8.0

Các cấu trúc dùng để diễn tả số liệu

  •  The New Zealand population increased slightly over the measured years.

  • There was an increase in figures for those aged 40 and over.

  • The total population in New Zealand rose by 0.6%

  • While the number of people aged 65+ saw the biggest increase.

  •  The number of people aged 40-64 years old increased by 0.6%, rising from … to …

  • Those aged 15-39 made up the largest portion of the population in both years.

Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 08/10/2022

Đề bài: The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Các đề bài liên quan

  • There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

  • Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Phân tích đề

Phạm vi chủ đề: Âm nhạc

Nhiệm vụ: Đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân

Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: 

  • Function: chức năng

  • Reduce stress: Giảm căng thẳng

Dàn bài

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Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng

Lý do để không đồng ý

  • Âm nhạc có vai trò thể hiện cảm xúc của tác giả.

  • Âm nhạc có vai trò giáo dục.

Bài mẫu 

Music plays a vital role in our life for being a source of entertainment, and it is often said that the primary purpose of music is being a stress reliever. In my opinion, I disagree with this viewpoint because I believe that many other functions are just as critical.

Some people would claim that the most crucial role of music is to help us unwind as it has a profound effect on both emotions and the body. To be specific, research has found that music can be a powerful tool to not only help us settle our mind when feeling stressed, but also promote healing and improve our overall emotional well-being.This is the reason why listening to music has always been a popular activity people would do after a hectic day to ease their stress from work and study.

However, I believe that various other functions are just as significant as the relaxation purpose aforementioned. To begin with, music has also always been part of cultural and religious rituals, which includes national anthems or wedding and funeral marches. This is the way in which music helps countries to represent their national identity. Moreover, music is also a form of art which helps decorate our daily life. It can be seen that many dull events of the day such as exercising or cooking can turn into something more enjoyable thanks to music, and movies which feature music are also more captivating.

In conclusion, relieving stress is obviously an important purpose of music, but cultural and artistic functions are equally significant.

Band điểm ước lượng

TR: 7

CC: 7

LR: 8

GRA: 8

Overall: 7.5

Từ vựng

  • a stress reliever: Công cụ giảm căng thẳng

  • critical : Quan trọng

  • unwind : Thư giãn

  • emotional well-being: Sức khỏe tinh thần

  • a hectic day: Một ngày bận rộn

  • cultural and religious rituals: Nghi lễ văn hóa và tôn giáo

  • national anthems : Quốc ca

  • wedding and funeral marches: Nhạc đám cưới/đám tang

  • national identity: Bản sắc dân tộc

  • a form of art: Hình thức nghệ thuật

  • Captivating: Thú vị

  • cultural and artistic functions: Chức năng văn hóa và nghệ thuật

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