Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 29/10/2022
The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
Dàn bài
Mở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của bản đồ |
Đoạn tổng quát (Overview) | Cải tạo, bổ sung một số khu vực trưng bày và công trình tiện ích |
Thân bài 1 | Nói về đặc điểm năm 2010
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Thân bài 2 | Mô tả những gì đã thay đổi đến năm 2013.
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Bài mẫu
The maps illustrate the changes to a natural museum between 2010 and 2013.
Overall, the museum underwent several changes, with the most noticeable being a major extension to the building, along with several new displays and facilities.
In 2010, the museum housed three main exhibition rooms and a lobby which contained the ticket desk. The dinosaur display was located in the room directly to the left of the lobby area, while the ocean hall was found directly behind the lobby. Meanwhile, the mammal exhibition was located in the room behind the dinosaur display.
By 2013, an extension had been built on the right side of the building, which was previously a garden. The new section of the building contained a new shop and cafe, along with a new display about human origins, and a new mammal display room. The room which previously housed the mammal display was fitted out with a new display on the Ice Age, along with a new room containing an insect display.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
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Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 29/10/2022
Đề bài: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The purpose of businesses is to make money and they should concentrate only on this. Do you agree or disagree?
Businesses often ignore their social responsibilities and focus on making money. What are the reasons? What are the solutions for this problem?
Dàn bài
Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng
Việc trụ vững được trong thị trường cạnh tranh là một điều rất khó | Công ty thể hiện trách nhiệm với xã hội thông qua việc đối xử và đãi ngộ nhân viên tốt |
Công ty cần ưu tiên đầu tư vào các mảng sinh lời và tạo ra lợi nhuận cho công ty. Việc cống hiến cho xã hội chỉ nên làm khi công ty vững về mặt tài chính | Về lâu dài, điều này nâng cao hình ảnh công ty và giúp công ty có 1 đội ngũ gắn bó hơn |
Bài mẫu
Some people believe that businesses should bear some responsibility to society in addition to making profits. I personaly agree with this viewpoint as I believe that without such responsibilities, private companies can cause too much harm to people and the planet for the sake of money.
On the one hand, it is essential for businesses to generate profits in order to survive in today’s competitive markets. Firstly, the primary objective of any firm should be to deal with the company's day to day running costs, including staff salaries, property rental fees, and other necessary expenses. Any social responsibility would be meaningless, if a company is unable to cover its basic expenses to supply their products or services to the public. Secondly, profits are also required to be reinvested back into the company in order for improvements and innovations to be successful. In other words, an enterprise must be in good financial health before it can make any positive contribution to society.
On the other hand, there are several compelling reasons why businesses should also give back to the societies in which they operate. The chief reason among these is that companies need to be concerned about the detrimental effects that their operations may be having on the environment. Furthermore, by contributing to society, businesses can enhance their image, which in the long term may also enhance their business sales. Donating to local charities, educational programs or environmental projects are practical contributions that firms can make to both fulfill their social duties and promote their image among citizens and residents.
In conclusion, while making profits should be prioritized, it is also important to consider the social contribution.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | LR: 8 | CC: 8 | GR: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
Từ vựng:
for the sake of: vì lợi ích của
to generate profits: tạo ra lợi nhuận
primary objective: mục tiêu chính
day to day running costs: chi phí thực mỗi ngày
cover its basic expenses: trang trải các chi phí cơ bản
be in good financial health: ở trạng thái sức khỏe tài chính tốt
compelling reasons: lý do thuyết phục
chief reason: lý do chính
detrimental effects: ảnh hương bất lợi/ gây hại
contributing to society: đóng góp cho xã hội
Fulfill: hoàn thành
promote their image: quảng bá hình ảnh
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