Bài mẫu IELTS Writing cho chủ đề Family ngày 16/05/2020

Đề bài mẫu và phân tích chủ đề Family

Đề bài

Today, parents spend little free time with their children. Why is this the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?

Phân tích chủ đề Family

• Chủ đề: Family

• Keywords: parents; children; spend little free time.

• Dạng bài: Two questions.

• Hướng dẫn tiếp cận: Đề bài có hai câu hỏi, mỗi một câu hỏi sẽ được trả lời bằng một đoạn thân bài.

Cấu trúc bài viết

Bài mẫu tham khảo

Modern parents hardly spend time with their children, even in their free time. There are a number of reasons for this, and children are likely to face greater consequences of this lack of parental presence.

Parents are less and less involved in their children’s lives for two reasons. Firstly, some people continue to work after leaving office because many jobs require such extra labour. Jobs in accounting or banking, for example, usually entail heavy workloads which may not be dealt with during office hours. This leads to more time being allocated to work instead of family. Secondly, many modern parents spend their free time on smartphones rather than with their children. Since smartphones grew in tremendous popularity in the past decades, vast numbers of people have been drawn and attached to such devices for different purposes, be it simply reading news or engaging in social media activities.

Spending little free time with children causes severe emotional distress and behavioral problems. Children who lack parental attention are likely to feel emotionally neglected. This may lead to lower self-esteem and antisocial behaviors, including delinquency, illegal drug use, and unsafe sexual relationships. More seriously, this may badly shape those children’s personalities and perception of life when they enter adulthood. While parents who are frequently absent throughout the day can also be negatively affected, the consequences that their children have to suffer from are far worse.

In conclusion, due to modern work requirements and smartphone overuse, parents hardly have time with their children. This lack of parental presence does more significant harm to children than it does to parents.

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

• Extra labour: lao động ngoài giờ.

• Entail heavy workload : đòi hỏi khối lượng công việc nặng.

• Emotional distress: lo âu về mặt tinh thần.

• Antisocial behaviors: hành vi chống đối xã hội.

• Shape personality and perception: định hướng tính cách và nhận thức.