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Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?

A wide range of people think that it is essential for retired people to sustain to get the opportunity and start working if they are able to have ability. From my point of view, I truly believe that some suitable jobs give to elderly people a sense of the satisfaction and comfort.

First of all, it is clarified that elder people will find happiness in works such as watering plants in the park or delivering newspaper in the morning or even taking care of the baby. They usually intend to wake up early due to their age. If there is no work from them, they can feel a bit boring. They can find the pleasure for their hobby job.

In addition, nowadays, more and more older people do not desire to have dependencies on anyone else. They always willing to support the young people, and definitely they want to get earn for their living. They can find a great deal of jobs which are suitable for them. For this reason, they can not only help to increase significant income for their family and this assists their children/their son/their daughter to decrease the anxiety of financial problems but also help to decrease the using money of governments in retirement period.

In conclusion, it is understandable why it will be better if elder people are able to do a job. In reality, there are a number of opportunities for them to find slight job in the Internet without pressure. Hence, they can support each others in the current life.