Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Supporting poor countries sparks a controversy over other ways than financial aid from developed countries. As far as I am concerned, if rich countries organize the funds properly, this financial assistance will bring a myriad of benefits for undeveloped countries. 

On the one hand, I agree with the point of view that without the correct management, monetary support from wealthy countries still may provide some negative effects to both local receivers and the donors. Firstly, this is a short-sighted measure because money cannot always be available to solve all the issues occurring in these countries. In other words, money is not the only factor leading to one nation’s poverty and additionally, not every problem can be tackled by financial aid. Furthermore, corruption still exists in some countries, which can hardly be addressed by a single wave of magic wand. Some government employees because of their own sake stop at nothing in defiance of potential risks to embezzle thousands of dollars from the charity. As a result, the truly poor people, who live on the breadline may not receive this money leading to the continuing of this problem.  

On the other hand, I contend that it is better to organize and spend this amount of money for practical purposes. Developed countries might use their financial aid for stimulating poor countries’ education, which is the root cause of poverty and other problems.  For example, they may open up the world of possibilities for students with difficult circumstances by providing scholarships and opportunities to learn at the developing education system or donating modern technological equipment. All necessary knowledge and skills are adopted in reality and enable residents not only to fulfill their daily expenses but also foster their country’s advancement. With the steadily increasing literacy rate, the living standards will improve and the society will be more civilized and gradually escape from the poverty circle with the passing of time. 

In conclusion, monetary support from developed countries might bear many favorable aspects for poor nations if this aid is organized and controlled for community’s purposes. 

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