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đề: Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Overseas films are received preference rather than local films when it comes to people's movie hobby. There are some primary reasons for this trend. To tackle this problem government should spend more subsidies on developing local film industries.
There are several reasons for those tending to watch foreign films, which are produced overseas. They have an elaborate investment in the whole process, therefore they are almost perfect with a range of factors like professional actors, high technology with real images, and lively background. For example, In Vietnam, people preferred watching 'Avatar' - an overseas movie to “Bogia” - a local movie, when they were released at the same time. To extend that, because of the enormous amount of filmmaking budget, 'avatar' is perfectly finalized with an attractive screenplay, vivid images, and professional actors. This easily impressed the watcher with magnificent scenes. As a result, 'Avatar' apparently became a leading film during that time. By contrast, “Bogia” film had worsened results, and few people were ready to spend their money on enjoying it. Due to its low budget, filmmakers had to minimize expenses sensibly, hence 'Bogia' which was produced with sketchy sets and amateur actors, couldn’t meet the audience’s expectations. To solve this issue and boost the local film industries, the government and relevant organizations play key role in it. Financial support from the government should be launched to film crew, so, they can improve high devices and advanced technologies that are used in creating backgrounds, and enhance their film equipment such as high-quality cameras, sets of lights, recording devices, etc. These film tools contribute to making clarity images and lively movement on the screen. Furthermore, Actors are also pivotal factor which create gripping movies. Therefore, the government should spend their budget on arts and educational organizations. These places would serve the purpose of nurturing talents as well as facilitating an environment for those who could develop their maximum abilities.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the preference for foreign films rather than local films, and the government should give financial assistance to local film screw so that they can attract a lot of people.

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