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Hồ Như Ngọc17/01/2023
For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art has played a crucial role in enriching cultures all over the globe since the beginning of mankind. However, the current perspectives on art’s value are underrated while science, technology, and business are considered priorities. This essay will discuss why people focus more on production efficiency and business start-up than art. This essay will also suggest solutions, including raising salaries for art industry workers and seeking potential artists.

As the world's population grows, so does the demand for goods and services. Due to resource scarcity, advanced technology is necessary for efficient production, in which extra merchandise is made while the quantity supplied remains the same. Aside from that, new business ventures promote increased exchange of goods and services, thereby boosting economic growth in response to rising demand. For instance, automatic watering machines with higher productivity for crops have been introduced to replace human workers.

Raising wages for art industry workers and identifying potential artists, on the other hand, could be solutions to the degradation of art activities. The government can encourage training to raise the value of the artwork of artists, thereby enhancing performance and salaries for those working in the art industry. Furthermore, potential artists usually discover their talents in early life, and teachers' encouragement will boost their confidence and ambition to pursue art. For instance, introducing art competitions in school will give those who love art opportunities to show up.

In conclusion, the current downtrend of art and the prioritization of business, technology, and science activities depreciate the value of the arts. This essay explained production efficiency and business start-up as a result of growing demand. This essay also recommended raising salaries for art industry workers and finding potential artists in school.

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