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Veroni Id16/05/2024
Nhờ mn chấm giúp em 2 bài writing task 1 dạng map, bọn em thi tháng 7 thì với cách viết hiện tại liệu có 7.0 writing nổi ko ạa


Bài 1:

The given maps detail the current layout of an office building and some proposed changes for its renovation.

Looking at an overall perspective, the future plan will entail major changes regarding the current grass area and office amenities, including more seating spaces and the expansion and relocation of the four offices.

Currently, the main building is flanked by two grass areas. With the proposed redevelopment, these places will be repurposed as an outdoor seating area on the west and a meeting area on the east. The existing WCs will be moved to the northeast corner of the building, accompanied by a coffee machine to further enhance convenience.

While the main corridor will remain largely the same, the four office rooms will be rearranged into two expanded office rooms on the southern part and replace the kitchen and the canteen on the northern side. Following the relocation of the offices, the front entranceway will also be adjusted to the center, facilitating the accessibility of this area. However, the storeroom will still remain.
 

Bài 2:

The maps illustrate some future changes that are proposed for an office building.

Launching into the depiction presented, it becomes evident that the proposed changes will entail the restructuring of offices in the center of the building, accompanied by the addition of outdoor seating and meeting areas.

Looking at the layout of the building as it is now, it can be noted that the main entrance is placed on the right-hand side. The doorway leads to a central corridor flanked by the kitchen, canteen, storeroom and toilet room on one side and four offices on the other. Next in line are the surrounding sectors on both sides of the building, characterized by outdoor grassy areas.

The second map depicts the planned reconfiguration of this existing space. For better accessibility, visitors to the office building will now enter through a new entrance in the center of the building, in between two main offices. Additionally, while the central corridor remains, the current kitchen and canteen are now removed to make way for new office areas. The existing WCs are also moved to the grass area and expanded to incorporate a coffee machine. An outdoor seating area with chairs is introduced on the left side to create a relaxing space for employees. As for the right side of the building, the current empty spaces will be replaced by a large meeting area to further enhance collaboration in the workplace.
 

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