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Question: Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Answer:

This essay will present some causes of why students leave high school without studying how to manage their money and respective solution. 

There are some reasons why learners in high school cannot manage after leaving school. Firstly, when student study in school, the teacher only concentrate on teaching general knowledge and not on money management. For example, In Viet Nam, to prepare for the university entrance exam - there it is decided that students can study in a good environment, high school teachers only teach the knowledge that will be tested without focusing on soft knowledge such as money management. As a result, student after graduating from school cannot manage their own money and spend it wastefully. Secondly, the fact that parents do not teach their children to save money is also the main reason. Because nowadays a lot of parents spend a lot of time making money and do not have time to teach them but just give them some pocket money. 

In my opinion, there is some solution the education can be seen. To begin with, the state can create some money-saving skills courses and teach them how to make money right for their age. Moreover, the government should encourage parents to spend more time in teaching their children how to manage money. 

In conclusion, I think it some reasons why students in high school cannot manage money, and I believe that the education system can be solved in differents ways.