Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 band 7 ngày 07/07/2022

Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 07/07/2022

Đề bài: The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans.
Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The diagram illustrates the steps in the processing of cocoa beans to make cocoa powder and chocolate. 

Overall, there are three main stages in the process, beginning with the collection of cocoa beans and ending with products ready to sell.

In the first stage of the process, cocoa beans are collected, dried and then shelled. The dried beans are then pressed to become cocoa liquor before undergoing one of two further processes. The cocoa liquor can either be further pressed, resulting in cocoa cake and cocoa, or the liquor can be further refined to make industrial chocolate with the addition of sugar and cocoa.

In the third stage of the process, cocoa cake is ground into cacao powder, which can then either be sold to consumers or used in the manufacture of cakes, drinks and other food products. On the other hand, industrial chocolate is processed further in the third stage to make finished chocolate products ready to be sold.

Cấu trúc diễn tả quy trình

• Undergo (v): trải qua

• Result in: tạo thành

• With the addition of: với việc bổ sung thêm

• Ready to be sold: Sẵn sàng để bán

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Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 07/07/2022

Task 2: Nowadays people depend on technology in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development?

Các đề bài liên quan

• In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

• Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: Công nghệ số

• Nhiệm vụ: Đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân.

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: 

  • Technology: công nghệ

Dàn bài

Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng

Bài mẫu

There is no doubt that technology has had a great influence on the way people spend their spare time these days. New technological devices offer people a range of things to do in their free time, and in my opinion there are both benefits and drawbacks. 

On the one hand, advancements in technology have brought about certain value to people. There are now countless options available on computers and other internet-connected devices to satisfy people’s need for entertainment, whether it be listening to music, playing computer games, or watching videos on Youtube. Secondly, for those with a more introverted personality, technology is a wonderful tool that helps them enjoy their own company without feeling bored. People are able to have a good laugh while watching a comedy show at home without the need to go out to a party or bar on the weekend. Additionally, people can now expand their knowledge as well as acquire new skills more conveniently thanks to smart devices such as the Kindle e-reader or Apple iPad.

On the other hand, this development can also be extremely harmful. The first disadvantage is that modern technology is likely to cause many people to live a sedentary lifestyle. This is because more and more people are now spending their leisure time sitting in front of a screen, rather than doing physical activity, and as a consequence, many associated health problems are on the rise. Moreover, technological devices like smartphones can ruin family time because people tend to be glued to their phones rather than interacting with their family members. Furthermore, excessive screen time among children can certainly isolate them from society and lead to developmental problems, such as language delay. 

In conclusion, how people spend their leisure time has changed dramatically due to the development of technology, and I believe that this trend is both positive and negative.

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Từ vựng

• technological devices: Thiết bị công nghệ

• internet-connected devices: Thiết bị kết nối mạng

• people’s needs for entertainment: nhu cầu giải trí

• Introverted (a): hướng nội

• enjoy one’s own company: thích ở một mình

• have a good laugh: vui vẻ

• a sedentary lifestyle: lối sống thụ động

• ruin family time: huy hoại khoảng thời gian bên gia đình

• be glued to sth: dán mắt vào cái gì

• excessive screen time: nhìn màn hình/ sử dụng thiết bị điển tử quá nhiều

• language delay: chậm nói