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Many of the cities worldwide are gradually developing, along with their problems. This essay will identify challenges experienced by teenagers in current trends and provide solutions.

To begin with, many problems can be brought about by the increasing number of developed cities. Firstly, adolescents find it difficult to make ends meet in big cities. Big cities can bring many opportunities for a career with a high salary, but the cost of living is a significant raise. Therefore, some young people still cannot fully support themselves financially. They even have to live with their parents due to the low savings. Secondly, the younger generation faces a range of society's vices. When the young leave the nest and come to a larger environment, they will easily be enticed by the attraction of social evils such as drugs, banned substances, theft, fraud,... They will eventually lose their individuality and become a burden on both their families and society. In addition, countless people endure physical and psychological harm because of insufficient security protocols.

There are several ways to solve these problems. First of all, each person should be aware of society's flaws and learn self-control. They can propagate with their neighborhood or workplace. For example, they can join some organizations that will teach them the harm of addictive substances and how to avoid them. In that case, they will know how to stay away from society's wrongdoing. Moreover, the government should pay more attention to security issues and businesses should also give employees a worthy salary increase so they can have a comfortable and easy life.

In conclusion, there are more and more problems adolescents can face due to the development of cities in the world, but there will still be ways to completely solve them.

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