Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 ngày 03/12/2022

Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 03/12/2022

Đề bài: The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries

Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The table provides details about the amount of calories that people from four different countries consume on a daily basis from different foods.

Overall, people in Egypt consume the highest amount of calories per day out of all four countries. Additionally, the biggest single source of caloric intake was from the consumption of rice in Cambodia.

At over 2,000 calories per day, Egyptians have the highest intake of calories of all four countries, along with the highest consumption of wheat (1095 calories/day). Their consumption of both rice (501 calories/day) and maize (578 calories/day) are around half that of their wheat intake. Meanwhile, the people of Poland have the lowest caloric intake of all four countries, with a daily wheat consumption of 865 calories and rice consumption of 19 calories.

Caloric consumption trends in Mexico and Cambodia are quite different, with Mexicans getting most of their calories from maize (1083 calories/day), while Camodians consume the majority of their calories from rice (1445 calories).

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• The highest amount of calories per day…

• The biggest single source of…

• The highest intake of calories…

• The Highest Consumption of …

• … around half that of …

• Caloric consumption trends … are quite different, with … getting most of their calories.

• … the majority of their calories.

Giải bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 03/12/2022

Đề bài: Some people think that it's important to spend  money on family celebrations (e.g. weddings, birthdays). But something expensive celebrations are a waste of money. Discuss and give opinion.

Các đề bài liên quan

• Some people think that it's important to spend  money on family celebrations (e.g. weddings, birthdays). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

• Some people think that it's important to spend  money on family celebrations (e.g. weddings, birthdays). Why? Should people spend a lot on weddings and other celebrations?

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: Xã hội

• Nhiệm vụ: Thảo luận về hai ý kiến và đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: family celebration: bữa tiệc gia đình

Dàn bài

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Bài mẫu

These days, holding lavish and luxurious parties on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and engagements is becoming more commonplace. While some people consider this to be an unnecessary and exorbitant luxury of the wealthy, others believe it is important to splurge on such occasions. Personally, I think that although fancy celebrations do create lasting memories, spending ridiculous amounts of money on such events is unnecessary. 

On the one hand, it is justifiable to spend lavishly on certain celebrations in some cases. For example, special events such as weddings are generally once-in-a-lifetime events that people want to remember for the rest of their lives, and therefore people like to spend a large amount of money to make the occasion special and unforgettable. Furthermore, certain celebrations are usually thrown in the form of a social gathering, where friends, relatives and even business partners can get together to socialise and build relationships. Spending generously on these occasions can show a certain level of respect to the guests from the party host.

On the other hand, expensive celebrations can be seen as a mere waste of money that could be better spent elsewhere. In some cases, luxurious gatherings are merely a way to maintain a social status among acquaintances. To meet such high expectations from societal pressure, people can be put under great financial strain and even go into debt. Additionally, the trend among young people these days to throw lavish parties has led to several socially unacceptable issues. The consumption of great amounts of costly drugs and alcohol leads people to become intoxicated and behave in an inappropriate manner, fighting and damaging public property. 

To conclude, it is understandable that some people like to throw lavish parties, while others oppose this way of celebrating. However, I believe that ceremonies should be held in moderation so as not to affect individuals and society.

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Từ vựng

• misspending of wealth: tiêu tiền sai cách

• lavish and luxurious: sang trọng và xa hoa

• Commonplace (n): một nơi quen thuộc, thường xuyên lui tới

• exorbitant (a): (chi phí) quá nhiều

• lasting memories: kỷ niệm lâu dài, khó quên

• ridiculous amount of money: số lượng tiền nhiều đến mức lố bịch

• once in a lifetime: một lần trong đời

• social gathering: sự kiện gặp mặt xã hội

• spending generously: chi tiêu hào phóng

• waste of money: sự phung phí tiền bạc

• show respect: bày tỏ sự tôn trọng

• wastage of wealth: phung phí tiền bạc

• social status: địa vị xã hội

• societal pressure: áp lực xã hội

• splurge (v): tiêu tiền hoang phí

• financial strain: căng thẳng về tài chính

• go into debt: rơi vào cảnh nợ nần

• Intoxicated (adj): say rượu