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Hoang An Nguyen15/07/2024
TOPIC WRITING TASK 2

 Without capital punishment our lives are
less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this opinion?   

 It is undeniable that capital punishment plays an
indispensable role in deterring people. However, there are several alternatives
for reducing crime rate.  

On the one hand, death penalty is known as the highest
punishment in the legal system. In fact, many people have no respect for the
justice system, hence, they will commit crimes more frequently than ever,
leading to the chaotic in societies. When the governments and authorities put
capital punishment on the public, this policy not only reducing high-profile
criminal cases but also making citizens have better consciousness of complying
with the legislation. In this way, the likelihood of recidivism would be
minimized effectively, which is a crucial part in ensuring social security and
contributing to societal development as well. According to the recent reports
of police stations of Viet Nam, after applying this punishment on all of
crimes, the rate of criminals experienced a decline trend from 66% in 2022 to
43% in 2023. Thanks to this stricter policy, our lives are guaranteed better.  

On the other hand, instead of applying capital punishment, the
authorities and lawmakers should fine crimes base on their level  of commitment. There are various human
solutions for different levels of crime. If they commit misdemeanors such as
theft, vandalism and disorderly behaviors, they should be moved to the
correction center where the polices redirect them to a constructive path. Take
an example of some people living in impoverish countries, due to craving for
quick money, they have a tendency to engage in criminal activities such as
theft or drug trafficking in order to achieve financial stability without
considering the negative result. To tackle this problem, the politicians should
provide vocational guidance and psychological support as the moral compass to
lead all of citizens to conduct moral acts.  

In conclusion, the capital punishment is not only way
to handle the increasing rate of crimes, instead, I firmly believed that humane
measures could be more efficient in this aspect.   









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Nguyễn Thị Thuỳ Dương13/07/2024
Ngữ pháp
Em muốn hỏi câu" Her hugs wipe away when she's been bad" . Trong câu trên thì tại sao lại là " is been bad" vậy ạ, nó thuộc cấu trúc ngữ pháp nào ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ!
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Nhu Trinh Phan Quynh11/07/2024
Grammar

*Cho em hỏi sao 4 từ này lại không được dùng trong TH nhấn mạnh vậy ạ?

Một số lưu ý khi dùng trạng từ chỉ tần suất

Hầu hết các trạng từ tần suất (trừ always, hardly, ever và never) có thể được đặt ở đầu câu hay cuối câu. Nếu được đặt ở đầu câu, trạng từ tần suất sẽ mang ý nghĩa nhấn mạnh. 

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Nguyễn Thị Đoan Trang09/07/2024
Sách ebook

Cho em hỏi nhận sách ebook như thế nào ạ


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Phúc Nguyễn09/07/2024
Bài tập về nhà

Tìm lỗi sau trong các câu sau:

1. I listening to music at the moment.


2. The girl are jogging in the part right now.


3. Do you doing the housework at present?


4. The children isn't helping their parents with the housework


5. What does she cooking for lunch now?


6. Be quiet! The babies are sleep in the bedroom.


7. My father is makeing a toy for me at the moment.


8. People destroy the environment today.


9. At this time, they is washing their clothes.


- 10. Does she skipping rope in the yard at present?

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Hùng Vũ09/07/2024
Tiếng Anh 6

Mng xem đúng hay sai, giải thích

Đây là bài mình làm khi đi thi,mng xem mình làm đúng chưa ạ.

1. Complete the second sentence so that it has the same meaning to the first onee .Use the word in brackets

A. Robots are not as intelligent as humans ( than )

Mình làm:

Humans are intelligent than robots 

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Hùng Vũ08/07/2024
Tiếng Anh 10

Cho em vài công thức after, before, by the time.

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Hùng Vũ06/07/2024
Tiếng Anh 9

sit for an/the exam hay sit in an/the exam?
∘ sách em ghi "sit in" mà trên mạng tìm toàn ra "sit for", cái nào mới đúng ạ? 

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Hùng Vũ05/07/2024
Tiếng Anh 6

Các cậu ơi cho mình hỏi nha vd có cái phần này nó hỏi phòng the science lab thì có mẫu ở trên cô mình dạy xong là cô đều phải nói đi qua phòng này xong mới đến cái phòng cô hỏi cái phần này là có sẵn hc thuộc dc nếu hỏi đến phòng khác như đến phòng 8 thì mình nói thế nào ý là đii qua cái phòng thì nói nó thế nào mình kb


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Nguyễn Thảo Trinh03/07/2024
Nhờ mọi người chấm giúp mình ạ "While some people think the function of music is to reduce stress, others believe that it is a good way of bringing people of different cultures together. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Many people associate music with mental therapies to diminish stress, while others consider it as a method of bridging cultural gaps. Although recreational aim of music is undeniable, we can not neglect their cultural function.

To begin with, listening to music is a ubiquitous method to relieve stress. The catchy tunes and sometimes hilarious lyrics can improve individuals' negative emotions. As a result, music has been used as sound healing in different spas. Music, in conjunction with other treatments, can create calming environment and allow customers to unconsciously experience the comfort and tranquility the spas offer. In addition, current music is developed into diverse genres and alluring performances, which can adapt to varied tastes of audiences and consequently, attract large number of fans purely for entertainment.

However, music also plays an important role in cultural development both domestically and exotically. Regard traditional values, music can convey meaningful messages such as patriotism or sympathy to different generations and reinforce countries' indentities, Moreover, when traditional cores are preserved, music will help to expose these core values to foreign cultures and therefore, break cultural barriers among nations. For example, Quan Ho - a type of Vietnamese traditional folk song, can easily arouse overseas visitors' curiosity and make them eager to find out more about the rich Vietnamese culture. By this way, music can serve as a powerful tool of connecting and uniting individuals with the same interests.

In conclusion, music is necessary treatment for mental well-being. But above this ordinary function, it is even more important for people to consider music an essential factor in developing and nourishing cross-cultural understanding as well as fostering global connections.

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